Discussion of "CHAINED" by aptriplett

I must say that I am enjoying your work! I find myself instantly engaged and now curious as to what will happen next and how the character got himself in this position to begin with. Nice.

it was a pleasure to follow up this story start.

Nicely done! You attracted interest from the first sentence and finished with a flourishing, surprising conclusion, though not a conclusion at all. Great job!

Interesting setting! You got me thinkin' about the back story and what type of world this without wasting any time. Intriguing. Way to go!