Discussion of "Medias: Paths to never" by an_dochasach
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an_dochasach 2 months, 1 week ago
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I'll publish this as soon as someone asks me to so as to not hold up the show. It feels like it isn't quite ready. Of course these things never are ready, are they? Let me know if you have any suggestions for changes before I publish. Thanks! |
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wolfram 2 months ago
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Perhaps re-format the chapter so it follows a verse form? I think your words flow nicely, but they appear to me in proselike rather than poetic format. (I must confess I know very little about poetry, so feel free to ignore this.) |
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an_dochasach 2 months ago
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Thanks |
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honeygloom 2 months ago
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Beautiful:) I can see what Wolfram is saying about the structure, but with the backwards alphabet theme that might get confusing. Take your time though, there isn't anyone after you yet. |
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an_dochasach 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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I won't have time to continue polishing this and I don't want to hold up the show. So I published. Now I see the typo in ifrost, word order problem with "prose, song and poem." I also know that many rhymes and rhythms could be improved. I'm open to suggestions! |
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wsells 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Don't change a thing! It's outstanding from Z to A! |
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an_dochasach 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Thanks wsells. |
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