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an_dochasach

Date Joined: Jan. 22, 2008
Last Login: Nov. 26, 2008

87 Comments by an_dochasach

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1 an_dochasach 3 weeks, 4 days ago Context

Thanks shadinah, this is an excellent intro and leaves lots of room for subsequent authors. I only hope I can find the time to try a follow up somewhere in this storyline.


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1 an_dochasach 1 month, 2 weeks ago Context

Wow, I like that each chapter has a unique cadence and style, yet all fit together partly because Arnon is so mysterious.


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1 an_dochasach 1 month, 2 weeks ago Context

Very nice, I like the change of pace too!


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1 an_dochasach 1 month, 2 weeks ago Context

Thanks wsells.


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1 an_dochasach 1 month, 3 weeks ago Context

I won't have time to continue polishing this and I don't want to hold up the show. So I published.

Now I see the typo in ifrost, word order problem with "prose, song and poem." I also know that many rhymes and rhythms could be improved. I'm open to suggestions!


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1 an_dochasach 2 months ago Context

Thanks
I'll try.


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1 an_dochasach 2 months, 1 week ago Context

I'll publish this as soon as someone asks me to so as to not hold up the show. It feels like it isn't quite ready. Of course these things never are ready, are they? Let me know if you have any suggestions for changes before I publish. Thanks!


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1 an_dochasach 2 months, 1 week ago Context

I'd like to follow yours if that's OK. This still needs a tuneup.


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2 an_dochasach 2 months, 1 week ago Context

Sorry I was on vacation last week at the edge of earth. I like wolfram's and don't mind following with chapter 3 or having mine sit outside the project. I'll see if I can tune up mine to more closely follow Wolfram's, maybe abandon the reverse alphabet thing though it was a fun challenge.


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1 an_dochasach 2 months, 2 weeks ago Context

I'd like to follow Nashvillebecker with chapter 3 on the first storyline.


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19 Chapters by an_dochasach

This saga's world comes from a book I've been working on.
Tags: epic, future, media, nada, pop-culture, saga
{moved to chapter 4 after Wolfram's}
Tags: culture, ephemeral, epic, pop, time
My first chapter 2 was incomplete and kind of a dud. I didn't like writing in that tense. The rules seem to be that I can write multiple chapter 2s but not a chapter 2 dud and chapter 3 so I hope this is better ;-)
It is not entirely unknown that Erwin Shroedinger's (not exactly, but occasionally half undead) cat had a cousin named "History". This is yet another chapter in History's 18 half-lives and infinite uninteresting but compelling adventures.
A 6th chapter of the story which began with NateG's "Prelude"
5th chapter of the story which began with NateG's "Prelude"
This is (I hope) an improved alternative to my "Day of rest" which I wrote as the chapter following NateG's interesting "Prelude."