an_dochasach |
Date Joined: Jan. 22, 2008
Last Login: May 11, 2011 |
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90 Comments by an_dochasach
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an_dochasach 4 years, 3 months ago
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Thanks. I think this is on the back burner unless you or someone else would like to continue it. There are fragments of a true story behind it. |
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an_dochasach 4 years, 5 months ago
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First guard's name is Brody, which means "man from a muddy place," because no one ever seems to know the ethnic origin of guys like him and Archie Bunker. I wrote the wrong name a couple of times, but I can't edit it now. Merry Christmas everyone. |
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an_dochasach 4 years, 5 months ago
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The last half was definitely tighter and had much crisper imagery. I'm glad to see that your "novelist pace" didn't stop you from getting the attention you deserve here. Excellent suspense building! |
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an_dochasach 4 years, 6 months ago
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Thanks shadinah, this is an excellent intro and leaves lots of room for subsequent authors. I only hope I can find the time to try a follow up somewhere in this storyline. |
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an_dochasach 4 years, 7 months ago
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Wow, I like that each chapter has a unique cadence and style, yet all fit together partly because Arnon is so mysterious. |
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an_dochasach 4 years, 7 months ago
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Very nice, I like the change of pace too! |
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an_dochasach 4 years, 7 months ago
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Thanks wsells. |
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an_dochasach 4 years, 7 months ago
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I won't have time to continue polishing this and I don't want to hold up the show. So I published. Now I see the typo in ifrost, word order problem with "prose, song and poem." I also know that many rhymes and rhythms could be improved. I'm open to suggestions! |
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an_dochasach 4 years, 7 months ago
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Thanks |
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an_dochasach 4 years, 8 months ago
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I'll publish this as soon as someone asks me to so as to not hold up the show. It feels like it isn't quite ready. Of course these things never are ready, are they? Let me know if you have any suggestions for changes before I publish. Thanks! |
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20 Chapters by an_dochasach
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2.9/5.0 - published Dec 23, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Oct 07, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
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-- /5.0 - created on Sep 16, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.9/5.0 - published Aug 01, 2008 - 12 comments - start of story (preview)
My first chapter 2 was incomplete and kind of a dud. I didn't like writing in that tense. The rules seem to be that I can write multiple chapter 2s but not a chapter 2 dud and chapter 3 so I hope this is better ;-)
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2.5/5.0 - published Jul 26, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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2.9/5.0 - published Jun 12, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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3.7/5.0 - published Mar 04, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
It is not entirely unknown that Erwin Shroedinger's (not exactly, but occasionally half undead) cat had a cousin named "History". This is yet another chapter in History's 18 half-lives and infinite uninteresting but compelling adventures.
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3.9/5.0 - published Feb 12, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Feb 19, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
A 6th chapter of the story which began with NateG's "Prelude"
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2.9/5.0 - published Feb 03, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.7/5.0 - published Feb 01, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Feb 01, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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-- /5.0 - created on Feb 01, 2008 - no comments
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4.5/5.0 - published Jan 31, 2008 - 7 comments
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3.8/5.0 - published Feb 08, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
5th chapter of the story which began with NateG's "Prelude"
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3.8/5.0 - published Jan 30, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Jan 27, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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3.7/5.0 - published Jan 30, 2008 - 2 comments
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3.7/5.0 - published Jan 25, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story (preview)
This is (I hope) an improved alternative to my "Day of rest" which I wrote as the chapter following NateG's interesting "Prelude."
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2.4/5.0 - published Jan 24, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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