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alyssapie09
Date Joined: Aug. 8, 2009
Last Login: Aug. 23, 2009

3 Comments by alyssapie09

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1 alyssapie09 3 years, 9 months ago Context

Your writing s very good. It drew me in from the begining and left me wanting to know more.

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1 alyssapie09 3 years, 9 months ago Context

Well thank you. Oh, those are out of my notebook I keep. They are from a little over a year ago. I have thousands of them. I havent been able to write anything...well actually finish anything for a few months. Its irritating. But thank you for the feedback. Its very helpful. And I will try the inanimate object idea. It seems like it will be a good challenge.

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2 alyssapie09 3 years, 9 months ago Context

I joined StoryMash so I could find out what people think about my writing and also to get some ideas for new ones. I have been in a rut for a while and havent been able to write anything for a few months now. I have only been adding my old stuff on here. So any comments?

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11 Chapters by alyssapie09

"Lies" by alyssapie09
2.9/5.0 - published Aug 10, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)
My own take on the subject.
Tags: lies
"Leave Us Alone" by alyssapie09
2.9/5.0 - published Aug 10, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Another one written by me and two friends of mine.
Tags: rumors
"Shut The F*** Up" by alyssapie09
3.4/5.0 - published Aug 09, 2009 - no comments (preview)
Two friends and I thought this up after some nasty rumors were being spread about us.
Tags: rumors, story
"My Darkest Secret" by alyssapie09
3.9/5.0 - published Aug 09, 2009 - 1 comment (preview)
Secrets, we all have them.
Tags: secret
"The Trust Is Gone" by alyssapie09
3.4/5.0 - published Aug 09, 2009 - no comments (preview)
This was written for my friend who felt she couldnt trust anyone.
Tags: trust
"She's Going Through So Much" by alyssapie09
2.9/5.0 - published Aug 09, 2009 - no comments (preview)
I wrote this for a friend who's parents were getting divorced.
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"What's Meant To Be Always Will Be" by alyssapie09
2.9/5.0 - published Aug 09, 2009 - no comments (preview)
Just a little something.
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"Just Let Them Go..." by alyssapie09
3.4/5.0 - published Aug 08, 2009 - no comments (preview)
I had a friend who was going through a rough time and got into some bad stuff so I wrote this for him.
Tags: go
"Tied With A Smile" by alyssapie09
2.9/5.0 - published Aug 08, 2009 - no comments (preview)
I had a friend who was depressed and faked her smile so I wrote this for her.
Tags: smile
"Darling You're Going to Make It Through" by alyssapie09
3.4/5.0 - published Aug 08, 2009 - no comments (preview)
I had a friend who's boyfriend broke her heart. This is what I wrote for her.
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"The Poems of a Teenage Mind" by alyssapie09
2.9/5.0 - published Aug 08, 2009 - no comments (preview)
I write poems for a living so this one is a preview of what will soon follow.
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