Discussion of "The Bedwetter" by alsoran

Hey,I really enjoyed this read...well written and I love the teaser ending. Love to see where this one is going. You have a nice cadence to your prose. Looking forward to more.

Thanks keysersoze! Am new to story mashing, but I really like the idea - I often want to re-write the endings to stories, or sometimes wonder what happens after "The End" and now I think I will finally get to find out...

This was really well done. Very enjoyable, loved the voice, welcome! And I hope to read more of you:)

Thanks honeygloom! Still finding my way round this site (in between playing peekaboo with my son!) I fear I am getting addicted to mash...

Oh yeah, it can be really addicting:)

Not bad at all. ;-)

Good Story. I hope to read on to find out what happens after after you talk to her on the phone. :)

Welcome to SM!

I just returned from a three week vacation and what jewels I've found since returning; new writers that all have real talent (at least the three I've read so far...;o)).

I love a good story and this is certainly one of those! The story alone would get high praise from me; add to that an engaging style, clever wordsmithing and excellent use of analogy...well, I can't find enough superlatives....lol.

Bravo!

:-) Thanks for your comment writerwannabe! Glad you enjoyed the story! Hope you enjoyed your vacation!