Discussion of ""Letter to the world that never wrote to me"" by alsoran

Talent has surfaced among us amateurs. I could feel, as the reader, you were leading me somewhere...I presumed to a flippant place where smart-alecks like me would have lead others. Instead...the ending stunned me.

I want to read more.

Dude, keep going! You left a bit abruptly, don't be afraid to go there.

:-) thanks a lot guys!!! Wasn't sure how it would come out - but you really got me thinking laurendobbs!
Cheers alharris! :-)

This was excellent writing, alsoran!

I loved the joke at the beginning and then the way you wove God and doctors, alternatively, into your story. Well thought out and paced.

A really good job! ;o)

Thanks a lot writerwannabe!

Very thought provoking and paced well too. Great job:)