Discussion of "The Bedwetter - II Psychic Intervention" by alsoran

1		writerwannabe 2 years, 6 months ago Reply Fabulous continuation, alsoran! I love your voice in this piece and you've done an excellent job of further defining Jack. A unique story premise and the last line. "Is it dry."...was classic!!
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1		alsoran 2 years, 6 months ago Reply :-) Thanks ww!
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