Discussion of "The Dream Machine" by alsoran

I think it's a really cool idea. It wouldn't hurt for you to go back and proofread your work---this is coming from a Yankee too. But overall I liked it and would want to see what happens next..

Thanks mjm942! Think I'll plod on with it - I have some ideas for what is going to happen next. Although would be interested to see it get 'mashed'.

Not a bad opener. Well done. ;-)

Thanks Alkamyst!

Very unique way of telling a dream story! Loved it.

Thanks writerwannabe!