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Discussion of "Leaving my Family - Biology Lesson" by alsoran

1		writerwannabe 2 years, 6 months ago Reply Great chapter, alsoran! Although most of this was a different version of laurendobbs chapter, rather than a second chapter that carried the story further, you did an excellent job of presenting it..;o)
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1		alsoran 2 years, 6 months ago Reply thanks writerwanabe
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1		alsoran 2 years, 6 months ago Reply sorry - writerwannabe! :-)
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1		writerwannabe 2 years, 6 months ago Reply LOL...no need to be "sorry". I was simply voicing my opinion, among which was the statement that I thought you wrote the chapter quite well...;o)
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1		laurendobbs 2 years, 6 months ago Reply Loved this addition. The ending was abrupt and left me wanting more. What's next?
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1		alsoran 2 years, 6 months ago Reply :-) Thanks guys!
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