Discussion of "Body Shots in Mexico" by allenmcclain

Outstanding! Well written, tight and good dialog. great buildup at the end of the chapter. It gets 5 from me.

Thanks Shadowman. I have a lot of written and half-written books on my computer and it's good to get them out to the world. Thanks again.

I know what you mean, I've got one complete novel (that needs a little updating) and one partial... This is a good place to stretch your writing legs a bit.

Very imnpressive! I am too scared to continue that one :-) I gave you a 5

Hey man, this is top notch. I got that delightful sensation I always get when I come across something really good to read.
Nothing to offer as far as constructive criticism. This seems polished and ready for print. Don’t be stingy ya hear. Let us read more!

Nice work...and a great lead off for mashin'. I look forward to more of the story and more from you! :)

Am not a writer in any way shape or form. I do LOVE a great storyline, this has a great depth with almost unlimited possibilities. Potential here is great.

This is well worked out. It's pro...ssional