Discussion of "Wanted: New Servant, Apply Now" by alharris

Damn...I got the servant gender wrong. I should listen to Jinx and keep as a draft!

Even with the gender, I thought it was a great addition to the first one. I like your style of writing, very clear. Great mashing Alharris.

Thanks, DK. I pride myself in trying to capture the original character's voice, but take the story in a new direction. I'm not sure I accomplished that here. I apologise to you, DK, that I haven't gotten around to comment on your writing. I will correct that soon.

Hi alharis.....I was astonished to see the similarity in the content of our writings.
Alharris...you read my posting...CAT MATTER..
But...alharris....I couldnt make out the ending of your chapter...
Your language ...is quite nice....
Looking forward to your new posting...
Loony

sorry.....I missed the point...
I am just getting aquainted with the ways...of Storymash.....
Ok Alharris...see you...

Ha...nicely done alharris. It’s always refreshing to come across chapters like these. Reminds us what SM is all about. Very entertaining!

I love the Mash! This was a great story to mash and take to a number of different directions. Tahnks, Dog!

This is pretty nice, I haven't read what goes before it yet though. You ready to start doing the weekly chapter thing?

I'm in. But let me up the ante. One new story and one mash per week. Whadaya think?

Sounds like a deal. I just wrote something if you want to mash it. And I'll gladly reciprocate. If you ever want to get a quick hold of me, my email is 24hourlight@gmail.cim

*.com

LOL!