Discussion of "UNFINISHED BUSINESS" by alharris

alharris...you are one of my favs here. I notice that you love to deal with stories concerning kids/teens/adolescents. You got an uncanny way of making things seem so real. The way you present your characters makes me think alot of my childhood, about times when school didn't seem so important. Whenever I pen something of my own, I get so drawn into the dark aspects of life and it usually comes out in my writings. Your work gives me a refreshing change and I thank you for that. I do not know where you are headed with this, but I will say that it is very intriguing so far.

Thanks, BH. I am looking forward to more poetry from you. Please review the next chapter as I take my three road warriors to a cemetary. I'll keep it as a draft for a day or so.

Reminiscent of your "Photographs, Pals and Potatoes" and "Cleaning Up After the Dog" which I dearly loved, this is fabulous writing, al.

I don't know how much of this (and the others) story are personal remembrances, but the way you write make it seem to be 100%. You capture your audience completely and wanting more and there's nothing more a writer, or reader for that matter, could ask for.

I hope you'll continue this series. I'm thinking (hoping) that they are part of a bigger project? ;o)

Thanks, WW. I appreciate what you're saying about capturing the audience. That's what you do so well. Yeah...I got to start getting back to the bigger projects of my life.

Your writing is always sharp and real, Al. And enjoyable to read, to boot. Off to the next chapter.

Thanks for reading, DJ. And thanks for contributing to the April Poetry Project! Get ready for next year!

Bravo. Well done sir.