Discussion of "Snatched Chap 4" by alharris

a guy named George barking orders to a guy named Lenny, really, did you have to rip off Steinbeck.

Welcome to SM, Mr. Shirt.

Gary is quite the example of originality after all. ;P

Another flawless chapter, Al. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Thanks, LadyA. I got another Snatched chap left in me. Is that OK with you? (I'm just not sure it's ok with my soul).

Go ahead with it. The beauty of mashing is I can just take it in a different direction. It's bound to be dark no matter what.

Fabulous, al! You've got this story by the neck and you're squeezing it out perfectly!

I really like the characters, Lenny and George. Well, I don't LIKE them...but, damn they're so real - Dr. Frankenstein, I presume?....lol.

George repulses me, which implies a great job of defining that character. Once again, great job. Hope her father's words and raising lets her give George a good kick to the groin.