seriously? I think my last line was absolutely terrible.

It is about a certain someonei know, and i didn't quite know what to think for the 'as finite as the stars', but i thought it was good because, you know the stars are one of closest numbers to infinite really in a way. Thanks for the comments and i will keep trying to write better poems by your feedback. . . thanks

and also, am going to start a kind of play story like shakespeare kinda stuff:)

Ah thanks for the comments:), i am very proud of my work to say, I have a very poor ability in English. Strangeley enough though, I try my hardest in my English lessons but can never pass.

I must admit the second to last line is definitely worth it:)

alright thanks a lot, am curious as to where i should post it though?

Hi I am Adam I am 15 and I love poetry, both writing and reading it. I am curious to know whether people share poetry on this site?