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ahill_88

Date Joined: Feb. 18, 2008
Last Login: Dec. 3, 2013

7 Comments by ahill_88

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1 ahill_88 5 years, 3 months ago Context

I really like this story start. It should be interesting to see what happens.


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1 ahill_88 6 years ago Context

This is very interesting because I have known people to be in the predicament of people assuming that they over react about everything. Sometimes it is those small things that you would never imagine...


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1 ahill_88 6 years, 3 months ago Context

This was awesome. By far one of the better story beginnings I've read. I hope you continue the good work; I look forward to reading more from you. I'm going to attempt to continue your story; let me know what you think.


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1 ahill_88 6 years, 3 months ago Context

Wow, this is really good. It was very emotional as well. Did you write this as a follow-up to my story or had you already written it and just wanted me to see it? Thanks for this, I really liked it.


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1 ahill_88 6 years, 3 months ago Context

This was unprecariously long. It was good content here and there. I'm not trying to cut it down but I think you went on too long with the ethics and deep thought for it to be a 'story.' It was very difficult to follow. I gave it a 2 because it was good content, just too much language jumbo...please don't be offended.


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1 ahill_88 6 years, 4 months ago Context

I'm sorry to confuse you. 'Step-dad' is the grandfather. He had called him Grand-dad and step-father is the father. This is based on a true story and that is how he referred to them. Sorry for the confusion.


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2 ahill_88 6 years, 4 months ago Context

I was very impressed with the way you turned my chapter. Very well done. I was unsure with where I would take it but I believe you did an awesome job; thanks!


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