Discussion of "Soul's cry... a memory" by aggykryss
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Chaos1306 3 years, 9 months ago
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I want to know what happens next!!!! |
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writerwannabe 3 years, 8 months ago
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Lovely...quick, concise. Good plotting and characterization. Looking forward to what she does next! |
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honeygloom 3 years, 8 months ago
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You do a great job of getting the reader into her mind and making us feel her emotions. |
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DTJedi 3 years, 8 months ago
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fantastic story thus far I loved it |
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grayjd 3 years, 8 months ago
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Very easy to read. Great descriptions and emotion. Waiting to see how she reacts. |
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ajk5 3 years, 8 months ago
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Fine work here. I think I might try mashing this. |
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plssizebabygirl 3 years, 7 months ago
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I watched her every move in my mind. AWESOME |
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xfionax 3 years, 7 months ago
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whoah......wow....... That was.....that was so...amazing. I felt everything! The good, the bad...everything the characters felt I did. Very good job! |
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scocdps 3 years, 7 months ago
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Wow, this reads like a movie. Good story! |
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