Discussion of "A poem... not a story" by aggykryss

Beautiful in its sadness.
It has a really nice flow to it.
I found I was almost singing it as I read.
Nice work!

I was just going to do something like this, well I still will but I guess on here I'll just continue with your theme

I think a poem is a great way to start a storty, even if it might not be a story... Anyway, I really enjoyed your word choices. Very evocative.

A poem? Sounds more like a Top 40 hit to me.

Either way, it still needs puncuation, even if it is a poem.