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Discussion of "A poem... not a story" by aggykryss


1 dogdeity11 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Beautiful in its sadness.
It has a really nice flow to it.
I found I was almost singing it as I read.
Nice work!


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1 RYN 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

I was just going to do something like this, well I still will but I guess on here I'll just continue with your theme


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1 Acee_Andrade 6 years, 3 months ago Reply

I think a poem is a great way to start a storty, even if it might not be a story... Anyway, I really enjoyed your word choices. Very evocative.


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1 MisterSirMan 6 years, 3 months ago Reply

A poem? Sounds more like a Top 40 hit to me.

Either way, it still needs puncuation, even if it is a poem.


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