Discussion of "Introduction" by aelita2006
eric_hayden 2 years, 10 months ago
This is a great introduction! It's very engaging! I like the idea of a girl who is bored with what is normal and wants to be a vampire.
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solo5 2 years, 10 months ago
i agree with eric hayden it is very engaging and i like the theme but you repeted yourself and i thought i might just point it out not to be rude i did really like it
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