Discussion of "Day 13 Lucent Dreaming" by abundantwater

I was hoping for more of what seemed at the beginning to be Tony and Karen when they were young. I thought it was a sweet little tease. However, I liked how you showed a more realistic version of how badly the tumor is affecting Tony's mind.

Thanks honey for your feedback, really appreciate it!

I think you mean lucid dreaming?

This was grounded and I liked it. It was reality, or rather Tony's semblance of it. Very enjoyable.

appreciate your comment acee.

Darn nab-it of all places to mis-spell a word --in the title.
thanks lamexican

I loved the 'lucid' dream state. The hallucinations you created within him were wonderful.
Very well written addition. This was a very intense chapter.
I like the fact that you make the reader wonder did he burn the bodies to try and cover up the murders, if the murders actually occured, and also what it was he was looking for/found in the purse.
Thanks for contributing and I look forward to working with you again.

It always good to leave a lead for the next writer to easily pick it up where you left off. I purposely left the purse event open if the next person chooses to use it to start the next chapter.