Discussion of "Atlantic City: Special Bullentin" by abundantwater

Sorry, I killed Susan! I was gonna kill her in 'black-eyed susan' but got distracted . Didn't read your mash till just now.
You should make Rodney into like a psychotic character, like the butterfly who set the school on fire... no one suspects the butterfly!

hey swamp, glad to hear from you I was trying to decide which way the story should go . I'm glad you left a comment making Rodney a psychotic sounds cool.do we want to make him a killer ?

Well the first portion of the story kinda makes him out to be guilty of something & he's got blue paint on his hands - but that doesn't necicarily make him the actualy killer.... he could be, but he could also have witnessed it, been an accomplice, killed the killer....i dunno. But, i think it is mentioned that Susan was his mother. Either way, Rodney seems somewhat psychotic bc he seems regretful & afraid at first but then he cusses out an old lady.. that's just what i think

i gave Rodney a little backstory showing his psychotic behavior even during childhood. well we can forget he's the killer idea was just a thought. i was thinking of adding more backstory for readers to understand his psychological makeup.