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Discussion of "A Conversation with Insanity" by Xylith


1 Xylith 5 years, 2 months ago Reply

Damn, I meant moonlit at the end. I have to stop writting late when I'm tired.


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1 dogdeity11 5 years, 2 months ago Reply

That creak you hear from your twenty-fiv"e thousand dollar kitchen..."

I love this paragrpah. very cool.
Nice work X!


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1 writerwannabe 5 years, 2 months ago Reply

I was so into the story that I didn't even notice "moonlight" versus "moonlit". This is very well done. Thanks!


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1 wsells 5 years, 2 months ago Reply

Didn't notice it either 'cause I was looking behind me.

Thanks for the chill!


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