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Discussion of "Shroomy-Jager Hell" by Xylith

1 dogdeity11 8 years, 10 months ago Reply

Masterfully done X.
Naturally the title hooked me. Then to find such evil inside.
I believe you’ve captured the essence of a closet trip pretty well here.
Gave ya a 5. because I like stories about drugs and devils. And because it was really good!

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1 Xylith 8 years, 10 months ago Reply

Thanks Dog.
it was spur of the moment and all.
Oh also added some more chapters to the how to win a storymash contest series with the alien stuff OS started a fourum site at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SMAC_MASH/
you should join.
thanks again my friend

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1 pssmyers 8 years, 6 months ago Reply

It was pretty good, especially the Lovecraft name drop. One thing though, you need a little work on your dialogue. Some of it just doesn't flow right.

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