Well I was about to say what JD already said...so I'll just say I'm verrrrry interested in this :)

Mmkay well I've read the first chapter..(just did that now as a matter of fact), and I actually really like it. It's a bit of a rough cut, what with everyone's dialogue being "he said, she said, she said inquisitively", but I'm betting that's one thing you're re-writing in the update. Either way, it's not enough to turne off from reading it, I'll be sure to follow the story line. :)

Haha thanks!!

I think it was a wee bit better than the last story I posted, I wasn't at all pleased with the other one even once it was finished. BTW, would you be interested in writing a chapter for this story?

Lemme know, Kass

Okay I know I said I'd get the next chapter of Immortal Beloved up this week, and I will! Or I'll at least try >.>

But I had this great idea for a story about a 19 year old girl living in the gangs of Los Angeles...and I kinda ran with it. At 2:45 A.M no less :p Anywho, I was wondering, as I have two versions of the same chapter, if anyone would be interested in reading both of them, and then writing a second chapter to whichever they preferred. The first chapter is from Sabrine's point of view, I'd like the second to either be from Leo's (read the story to know who's who), or from Matt Fullers.

Let me know if you're interested.

Kass

P.S. The links for both versions are below

http://storymash.com/u/Xena2291/fakikito/

http://storymash.com/u/Xena2291/woguwese/

Thanks ladyvike. :)

I've been working on getting out of this writers block slump I've been in lately, and Immortal Beloved was the first thing to come from it, so I know it's not the best. I'll take a look at your work as well when I get the chance.

Thank you! I'll try my best to get the next chapter of Immortal Beloved up within the next week, unless someone else wants to write it. :)

Anyone know of a site that pays you to be a written roleplayer? I've been addicted to this for god knows how long, but I want to see if I can make money at it.

Thanks, Kass

Loved the rhyme scheme, it was perfect. It's not very often I find poems that keep my attention anymore. Great job :)

Excellent writing! I'm a bit envious even, wishing I could write like you. I'm dying to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

Kass

Thank you! And also thanks for the comment on my first chapter!

Kass