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Discussion of "Unstable" by WritingFreak


1 writerwannabe 3 years, 8 months ago Reply

Welcome to SM, WritingFreak.

I sincerely hope that this is not a real biography!
If it is...please know that you must re-write the part of your story that talks about no sympathy. You certainly have mine.

I like your pacing, the short sentences. The voice, too, is authentic...that of a fourteen year old...a precocious fourteen year old, to be sure. Interesting how you brought me into the story. I'll be looking for more...;o)


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1 e2ew1 3 years, 8 months ago Reply

Awww, i really hope that this isn't real! I feel So bad!


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1 solo5 3 years, 8 months ago Reply

not only do i feel bad for people who have it i fell ashamed that i possibly(probably) have been one of those figures who think that people in wheel chairs and physical deseiases(?) are also stupid


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1 solo6 3 years, 8 months ago Reply

Wow this an insredible story, but if this story is true i fell really sorry for you. I hope this isn't a real story, is it?


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1 Netnet 3 years, 8 months ago Reply

I hope this story completely fiction, and if not well why don't go do some volunteer work. helping others will make you feel a lot better about your self.


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