Discussion of "Flashback of hysteria" by WildGypsy

If the goal of this story and its previous chapter is to make me feel discombobulated, or to make me experience, through words, a trip of some kind, then excellent work.

I really have no frame of reference in my own life that compares to these stories, but they do have enough imagery to make them interesting reads. Fun stuff!

I give it a 4!

Ratings explained!!!

Mostly I only connected to the story on an intellectual level. I understood what was going on but it didn't trigger any "soul strings". Not to say it was bad by any mean, just not my cup o' tea.

Just a few technical errors, but I don't really dock points for that.

"let he who live without sin cast the first stone"

I am not that man, asI just can't seem to keep those pesky errors from sprouting in my own work.

Lets see some more stuff.

I enjoyed where you took the story! I guess you deserve the kudos you spoke of in the comment you left on http://storymash.com/u/dharmapunk33/higinano/

Both you and Dharmapunk33 have collaborated very well together! The story had a similar feel to "high enlightenment". And yes, very descriptive to the point where I was "seeing colors and hearing music" well done!