nice dialog between the characters!

"I see her in the distance. She's aprroaching me slowly, with her head down and trying to look sorry for what she's done and what she's about to do. I inhale sharply and force a look that says "I don't mind." Here she comes. I try to exhale as she approaches, but my lungs are temporarily broken."

Beautifully written!

I agree! After reading this I began having flashbacks. Kudos to anyone that can follow such an exciting and interesting storyline!

Some people are twisted huh? It seems as if Wayne has a hard life, who could blame the guy for being a perma-drunk with all the townies giving him so much grief. Maybe the next chapter he'll sober up some? Nice story! In fact, I enjoyed both this story and "High Enlightenment"