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Discussion of "Goo 3" by WBScott


2 MrLightening 3 years, 7 months ago Reply

I forgot about Goo! Yeah, this is hilarious. Completely off topic in a totally WBS sort of way. No seriously, I think it's really good. I've got some work cut out for me tomorrow :))


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3 writerwannabe 3 years, 7 months ago Reply

Good job, WBS.

I gotta say, though, that this story that started as a light hearted children's story has sure turned into something else entirely. Not that that's a bad thing, necessarily.

Still, I'd have liked it better if you and Light had kept the "genre". Just my opinion, of course.


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1 WBScott 3 years, 7 months ago Reply

Yeah, you know what took me so long is that I wanted too, but I just wasn't able to mash the two previous chapters together and keep it interesting, so I fell back on what I knew.


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1 Acuariana 3 years, 7 months ago Reply

Keep up the good work, WB! I am interested in reading more on why Tim got fired.


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1 SilenceiztheonlyWord 3 years, 7 months ago Reply

this is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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1 WBScott 3 years, 7 months ago Reply

Acua, Word thanks.
I said Tim got laid off, and left it at that. Usually in those cases it's not really his "fault" by the company is downsizing. I didn't see the reason as to why he got fired to be crucial to the story.


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