Discussion of "SUDS - Novel Relations" by WBScott
Cheeseliker 1 year, 2 months ago
Haha, great continuation! The reveal of the monster/killer is great at the end, a nice cliff-hanger for the next chapter. You added just enough for the fourth chapter, leaving enough to be told in the last two chapters. I really like this cute little story.
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WBScott 1 year, 2 months ago
I only hope it gets finished!
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