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Discussion of "SUDS - Novel Relations" by WBScott


1 Cheeseliker 1 year, 2 months ago Reply

Haha, great continuation! The reveal of the monster/killer is great at the end, a nice cliff-hanger for the next chapter. You added just enough for the fourth chapter, leaving enough to be told in the last two chapters. I really like this cute little story.


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1 WBScott 1 year, 2 months ago Reply

I only hope it gets finished!


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