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Discussion of "A Cute Guy in Vampire/Zombie Highschool" by WBScott


2 alharris 3 years, 12 months ago Reply

OK, that settles it. You are officially the most hilarious writer to ever ear a degree in Mathematics. Second paragraph: Seventeen year or years?


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1 alharris 3 years, 12 months ago Reply

earn or fear---you pick.


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1 WBScott 3 years, 12 months ago Reply

Ah the beauty of draft, fixed it thanks:)


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1 alharris 3 years, 12 months ago Reply

Samoht---Thomas. Interesting.


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1 hebe6405 3 years, 11 months ago Reply

Oooooo... didn't have a chance to check this out until today. (One disadvantage to no longer working in an office: my internet time has been cut by approximately 6 hrs a day.)

First, I'm pleased to see a chapter continued upon which I had once commented on a long, long time ago. Second, I like the continuation and have a great idea fermenting for chapter 3.


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2 WBScott 3 years, 11 months ago Reply

Can't wait to see what you come up with!


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5 skylark10 3 years, 11 months ago Reply

I love the twist from the conventional story line. It opens up many possibilities for future chapters. Nice touch having Samoht "walked in hunger..." as he came to the farm. If only Thomas knew the value of his hard work!


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3 WBScott 3 years, 11 months ago Reply

As I feel that I'm writer that prides himself on leave subtle analogies, I have to say that one was completely unintentional...but it's good!

Wait! I'm so good that it was done subconsciously. Yeah! That's the ticket:)


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3 writerwannabe 3 years, 11 months ago Reply

Obviously, I had to read the first chapter - first!

How in the hell you got from that to this is...typical...WBS! LOL. Loved the twist, right off the bat, in the storyline.

Your chapter, then, was very well written and paced and the tie-in to the original chapter at the end was very, very well done.


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2 WBScott 3 years, 11 months ago Reply

Thanks!
I don't mean to be twisted, but I just can't help myself:)


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2 Aggeloi 3 years, 10 months ago Reply

I agree - a hilarious take on the traditional plotline. Cracked me up!


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2 Cheeseliker 3 years, 10 months ago Reply

Great job here WBScott, only much too short. I would've liked as much detail about Samoht's life as there was in the first chapter with Thomas's. Awesome idea though.


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1 WBScott 3 years, 10 months ago Reply

Thanks Cheese.
Thanks Agg.

I also felt that the chapter was short after writing it, but at the same time I felt I had said everything I wanted to say about Samoht in this introduction.


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