Discussion of "Memoir Blues of a Chaos God" by VictorMensa
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honeygloom 1 year, 9 months ago
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Awesome job! It's an interesting concept and I like how you handled it, a little mystery and just enough information to keep me reading. Very well written. On to chapter 2! |
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theblackhand 1 year, 9 months ago
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I agree..well written and mysterious... |
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VictorMensa 1 year, 9 months ago
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Thank you kindly for your comments! I will be out of town through the end of the month of May. Upon my return I will be working up the next chapter. |
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mybeautifuldaydream 1 year, 7 months ago
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Good job. THe tone reminds me of "Interview With A Vampire", playful yet dark. I like it. Good piece. |
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Cornelius 1 year, 7 months ago
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Absolutely outstanding, bumping shoulders with Clive Barker. It is haunting and strangely beautiful, heartbreaking, sad, and creepy. Very stirring. I think there are too few 5s handed out on SM. I give this a resounding 5.0! |
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