Good...yet very disturbing...

Thank you, really! I thought it was one of the better pieces I've written. I've missed SM quite a bit. If you have any advice I would be glad to hear it.

Good job, but you should work on your grammar a bit more and spell check it a bit. It was a very interesting story though.

Hi, I am promoting myself I guess. I am looking for some more reviews on my writing and some tips, preferably on the storyline I really am working hard on, Elfin (Still trying to think of a better title!). It would be fantastic if I could get some help and input.

I am working on writing a book and would like some input on my story so far. The elfin series!

Hey all, I just wanted to say that I am working on a novel at the moment and am publishing chapters! It is the Twelve Lords stories!

I plan to delve a bit deeper into the inner machinations of Shiandrin and Ikbar's rise and fall from power. I think this rewrite is necessary.

I have added the next chapter, I hope you enjoy!

Continuation on the prologue, please tell me what you think!

An interesting idea, but not the direction that I am taking it chloe. I am great excited by the fact you find my writing so interesting as to continue it.