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TornConcious

Real Name: Schuyler Roper
Date Joined: May 25, 2008
Last Login: Dec. 5, 2014

31 Comments by TornConcious

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1 TornConcious 4 years, 9 months ago Context

Good...yet very disturbing...


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1 TornConcious 4 years, 9 months ago Context

Thank you, really! I thought it was one of the better pieces I've written. I've missed SM quite a bit. If you have any advice I would be glad to hear it.


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1 TornConcious 4 years, 9 months ago Context

Good job, but you should work on your grammar a bit more and spell check it a bit. It was a very interesting story though.


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1 TornConcious 6 years, 2 months ago Context

Hi, I am promoting myself I guess. I am looking for some more reviews on my writing and some tips, preferably on the storyline I really am working hard on, Elfin (Still trying to think of a better title!). It would be fantastic if I could get some help and input.


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1 TornConcious 6 years, 2 months ago Context

I am working on writing a book and would like some input on my story so far. The elfin series!


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2 TornConcious 6 years, 3 months ago Context

Hey all, I just wanted to say that I am working on a novel at the moment and am publishing chapters! It is the Twelve Lords stories!


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1 TornConcious 6 years, 3 months ago Context

I plan to delve a bit deeper into the inner machinations of Shiandrin and Ikbar's rise and fall from power. I think this rewrite is necessary.


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1 TornConcious 6 years, 3 months ago Context

I have added the next chapter, I hope you enjoy!


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1 TornConcious 6 years, 3 months ago Context

Continuation on the prologue, please tell me what you think!


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1 TornConcious 6 years, 3 months ago Context

An interesting idea, but not the direction that I am taking it chloe. I am great excited by the fact you find my writing so interesting as to continue it.


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