Discussion of "The Call - Chapter 4 - Branch Story" by TomTen3001

TomTen - I LOVE this aspect. In my opinion, way better than what I wrote...in fact, I think I'd like to continue this one, if I could. But, as I am anxious to see what you've got in mind for why some were not whisked away, I will stay away from that. I think there may have been a hint there in the cough, perhaps? It is interesting how vastly different a story can go from one point...but I think I like the added mystery and tension you've put here. And the ending was fantastic! I loved the way you wrote it..."the second appeared out of thin air" Great! I am going to work on this one over the next couple days. (Oh, and for clarity's sake if nothing else -- I am a her)

P.S. I gave you five very well-deserved stars!

Thanks Imadj!

I'll hold off until your Chapter 5, but you're right regarding the cough. Not to give too much away (if there are others other than the two of us).

Hot!