Discussion of "The Migraine Headache" by Toasty

I like how bits and pieces of the words are missing when there's dialog. The beginning paragraphs could use some revising and a little more work, though. Otherwise I think it has a lot of potential :)

thanks. i am only 14, but i agree with you

could go in a million directions...maybe watch for typos (yeah, i have them, too). good possibilities. would like to see some expansion from the original author.