Discussion of "Driven to insanity in Mexico" by Thelestro

2		clevgrl 2 years ago Reply I noticed your story had been read 75 times, and voted for twice. What's the point of reading them if we don't vote??? I have the same dilemma. I know your character is writing this crazy journal, and all, but paragraph breaks would make it a lot easier on me, and I don't think it would kill the TENSION.
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1		dharmapunk33 1 year, 11 months ago Reply I enjoyed the story. Was wondering if you would like to collaborate or continue a chapter on one of my stories? http://storymash.com/u/dharmapunk33/higinano/
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1		hebe6405 1 year, 5 months ago Reply Wow - this is excellent. It's one of the best things I've reads in quite some time. The start hooked me immediately. Needs just a tiny bit of editing for a few typos. I liked the pacing, the way the characters were presented, and the explanation of the protag's motivation. The low rating (2.9 at the time of my reading) is confusing. I scored it 5 stars.
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