Discussion of "Driven to insanity in Mexico" by Thelestro

I noticed your story had been read 75 times, and voted for twice. What's the point of reading them if we don't vote??? I have the same dilemma. I know your character is writing this crazy journal, and all, but paragraph breaks would make it a lot easier on me, and I don't think it would kill the TENSION.

I enjoyed the story. Was wondering if you would like to collaborate or continue a chapter on one of my stories?
http://storymash.com/u/dharmapunk33/higinano/

Wow - this is excellent. It's one of the best things I've reads in quite some time. The start hooked me immediately. Needs just a tiny bit of editing for a few typos. I liked the pacing, the way the characters were presented, and the explanation of the protag's motivation. The low rating (2.9 at the time of my reading) is confusing. I scored it 5 stars.