Discussion of "Putt Putt - Chapter 1" by ThandieD
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solo5 1 year, 3 months ago
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the writing was pretty good but the chapter had no direction, nothing to let us look forward to the next one |
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solo5 1 year, 3 months ago
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the writing was pretty good but the chapter had no direction, nothing to let us look forward to the next one |
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