Talisman |
Date Joined: Feb. 8, 2010
Last Login: July 19, 2010 |
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4 Comments by Talisman
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Talisman 1 year, 9 months ago
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Wha? It was a story based on the entire poem "The Raven". Since it was mandatory for kids in our class to write it, I wrote it, and placed 2nd out of the 31 kids in my class. The first was one of my good friends. Anyway, this type of writing is not my best... I have other works as well. =D |
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Talisman 1 year, 12 months ago
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Your chapters are too short. If this were a real book, it'd probably be a book for children. Try to expand it more, maybe that'll help the chapters and the story develop more. |
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Talisman 2 years ago
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Nice job. The 2.9 is probably somebody else voting, who goes to everybody's and does that... I've gotten 2.9's out of random too... Write more. I'll love to see what happens next. |
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Talisman 2 years ago
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Ahh, it took a while... Please rate and comment. I've gotten a lot of people saying it's good. =D |
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10 Chapters by Talisman
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2.9/5.0 - published Jun 13, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Jun 13, 2010 - no comments (preview)
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3.4/5.0 - published Apr 21, 2010 - 2 comments (preview)
Won 2nd place out of the 8th grade interpretation story for my class. =P
A interpretation of the Raven. I wrote the story, not the poem.
Tags: 2nd-place-winner, competition, edgar-allen-poe, interpretation, lenore, nevermore, raven, story |
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2.9/5.0 - published Mar 07, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Mar 07, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Mar 07, 2010 - no comments (preview)
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-- /5.0 - created on Mar 07, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Feb 28, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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3.4/5.0 - published Feb 08, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)
The first mission of infiltration in the Belkan Special Operations.
Tags: ace, ace-combat-six, army, belka, belkan, combat, gracemeria, m110-sniper-rifle, m249-parabellum, m4a1-sopmod, m6a2, operations, special, usp45, zero |
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