Discussion of "The Black Hand" by TD43

1		TD43 2 years, 11 months ago Reply Please comment
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1		Joelpalasue 2 years, 11 months ago Reply Well one of the things that personally throws me off is that there are no breaks in the story. It has no paragraphs. This has confused me a bit, not knowing who is doing what a revision with breaks will be great. Hope this helps.
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