Discussion of "The Black Hand" by TD43
TD43 3 years, 5 months ago
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Joelpalasue 3 years, 4 months ago
Well one of the things that personally throws me off is that there are no breaks in the story. It has no paragraphs. This has confused me a bit, not knowing who is doing what a revision with breaks will be great.
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