Discussion of "The Vampire" by Syrena
prtyemogrl 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Wow. That is really good.
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summersunset 11 months ago
I really like your story. But, no offense, it was a bit rushed. If you continue your story more dramatically and not so rushed, it would be an amazing story. :)
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