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Discussion of "Entertainment" by Sunshinegirl10165

2		theblackhand 1 month, 1 week ago Reply Very intriguing.
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2		thamagnopen 1 month, 1 week ago Reply This story was very short but very interesting though. I hope to see more. Good Job catching my attention.
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1		purplesea 1 month, 1 week ago Reply love the concept. A bit careless with punctuation, which is a bit distracting (always proofread), but good writing nonetheless. good job!
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1		Aggeloi 1 month, 1 week ago Reply I agree - very attention grabbing. I really enjoy the concept. Good job!
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1		shadinah 1 month, 1 week ago Reply Neat storyline! Can't wait to see more.
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1		timiee 1 month, 1 week ago Reply OMG XD ITS YOU!! I DIDNT KNOW YOU HAD A STORYMASH >.> why didnt you tell me and all of a sudden i login and i see your story right there and im all THAT IS HER STORY O.O XD
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1		Sunshinegirl10165 1 month, 1 week ago Reply yes, its me. lol thanks for the tips and er... what not >.> and yes im quite aware i fail at puncutation but im working on it! heh
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