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Discussion of "Entertainment" by Sunshinegirl10165

2		theblackhand 3 years, 4 months ago Reply Very intriguing.
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2		thamagnopen 3 years, 4 months ago Reply This story was very short but very interesting though. I hope to see more. Good Job catching my attention.
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1		purplesea 3 years, 3 months ago Reply love the concept. A bit careless with punctuation, which is a bit distracting (always proofread), but good writing nonetheless. good job!
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1		Aggeloi 3 years, 3 months ago Reply I agree - very attention grabbing. I really enjoy the concept. Good job!
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1		shadinah 3 years, 3 months ago Reply Neat storyline! Can't wait to see more.
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1		timiee 3 years, 3 months ago Reply OMG XD ITS YOU!! I DIDNT KNOW YOU HAD A STORYMASH >.> why didnt you tell me and all of a sudden i login and i see your story right there and im all THAT IS HER STORY O.O XD
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1		Sunshinegirl10165 3 years, 3 months ago Reply yes, its me. lol thanks for the tips and er... what not >.> and yes im quite aware i fail at puncutation but im working on it! heh
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