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Discussion of "For Those I Would Die For, I Salute You!" by Stalkingvengeance


1 writerwannabe 3 years, 6 months ago Reply

Great stuff here, SV! I don't know how long its been posted, but I imagine a few months. Sorry, it took so long to get here.

Very vivid descriptive paragraphs and telling rather than showing. Good action scenes and the dialogue and interaction with the "mates" was excellent.

Why haven't you published? ;o)


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1 Stalkingvengeance 3 years, 6 months ago Reply

To be honest, i've just been too lazy to do a final proof-read. Lol.


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