Sliver_Coin |
Date Joined: Sept. 2, 2008
Last Login: April 28, 2012 |
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4 Comments by Sliver_Coin
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Sliver_Coin 3 years, 10 months ago
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Thanks I really didn't stick to a certain structure of poems but it was fun making it. ^_^ |
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Sliver_Coin 3 years, 10 months ago
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I have another advice too! When it come into dialgue instead of using the same words over and over again like "I'm bored," Jenny Said. "Well than do someting," Tim said. YOU SHOULDN'T USE THE SAME WORDS OVER AND OVER AGAIN like instead of said you could say stated. Also, don't blabber on and on like I doing right now,it gets confusing, frustrating, and bother. Don't blabber for pointless; keyword POINTLESS things. When it cames to that get straight to the point. |
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Sliver_Coin 3 years, 10 months ago
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Sliver_Coin 3 years, 10 months ago
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Thanks I'll have the next chapter out today ^_^ |
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10 Chapters by Sliver_Coin
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2.5/5.0 - published Jan 20, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Jan 19, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Descprition about eyes.
Tags: eyes |
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2.7/5.0 - published Jan 19, 2010 - no comments (preview)
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0.5/5.0 - published Jan 19, 2010 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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2.9/5.0 - published Jul 05, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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0.5/5.0 - published Jul 05, 2009 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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3.5/5.0 - published Jul 01, 2009 - 4 comments (preview)
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3.0/5.0 - published Oct 16, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)
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-- /5.0 - created on Sep 02, 2008 - no comments
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