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Discussion of "Oh Sweet Sorrow." by SilenceiztheonlyWord


1 prettyprincess140 2 years ago Reply

Just wanted to point out a spelling error "I shall feel you no more,"? < See right here. You have a coma in the wrong spot and your quotation's wrong. Easily fixable.
This poems a little different from the rest of you writing. I like it. It almost sounds like someone cheated on their loved one or something.


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1 SilenceiztheonlyWord 2 years ago Reply

oh... okay. thanks


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