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Discussion of "Bikerfox chapter 3" by Shamus_Goldensteinbergbaum


2 honeygloom 5 years ago Reply

Great minds think alike:)


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1 dogdeity11 5 years ago Reply

Shamus, Shamus…you beautiful and demented poet.
To start: “David let an exaggerated groan as he busted a nut in the mouth of his hog-tied victim.”
To close: “Mr. Scheel hung his head and wiped the gob of Frank's semen from his hand.”
The build-up is sensational. What sort of nightmares are these two brilliant deviants going to accomplish in their lives. I suspect they will eventually be reunited. How many victims will it take?
You make me ashamed to love this…which makes me love it even more.
I see there are only three more chapters available. I’m pacing myself.
I gave this one a five.
And per your request, I commit to one day soon go back and review those chapters of yours that I apparently misunderstood previously. How could they not be brilliant!


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