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Discussion of "Mirror, Mirror... ( 1 ) The man with no reflection" by ShadowedPen


1 AngieBanangie 4 years, 10 months ago Reply

That's truly amazing.
I loved it.
It really confused me at first why his wife was freaking out about a mirror, and I thought it was gonna be one of those depressions.
But I really like it, keep going. If you publish this as a book, I would read it no doubt.


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0 DwayneHoover 4 years, 10 months ago Reply

Cool story. what if brians double, never comes back. maybe he goes on a murdering rampage or something, and it tears a hole in the space time continuem. what if his double shows up at his door. his evil doppleganger.


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1 thamagnopen 4 years, 10 months ago Reply

I too enjoyed the story!
I encourage more...


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1 writerwannabe 4 years, 10 months ago Reply

Fantastic imaginative writing, SP. Love it. Now, I've got to see what QC added!


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1 honeygloom 4 years, 10 months ago Reply

Expertly written, unique story, I love it! Really great writing, great job!! 5 from me:)


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1 jakestar 4 years, 10 months ago Reply

I'm not sure I can give you a comment more flattering than the ones already posted here but I have to say, when someone puts fantastic writing together with a unique, attention grabbing concept you get something addictive. A great story that entangles you in its detail created world and makes it hard to walk away. Develop this please I would love to read more.


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1 cls78628 4 years, 8 months ago Reply

Great idea and nicely descriptive. Eager to see what further developments ensue.


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1 dogdeity11 3 years, 6 months ago Reply

Ahhh, this is so awesome! Cant believe it’s been posted for over a year and I am just now getting to it. Really fantastic job. Great concept…great writing.


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1 cartoonfruit 2 years, 8 months ago Reply

This is just really interesting!


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1 BazookoJones 2 years, 6 months ago Reply

Very creative. Shadow you are highly creative and I try and read you and a select few others on here post. I just got to this. Taking a break from my shiz, don't know if writer's block's got me or Life clamping down on my sad borrowed flash, but here it is...Dec 17th in the sticks, 3 a.m., sipping some Scotch and easing the mind. Thanks for this. Tonight, I plan on reading some of my fav authors on here, to recalibrate my synapses so to speak and get in that ZONE if that's possible. Seems like a good night to wax nostalgic on all the good this site produces


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1 TrumanSBooth 2 years ago Reply

Spectacular! I see it's been 5 months since anyone commented on this, but after nearly 3 years, this is as thrilling and fascinating to me as it was to its first reader. Really clever stuff--excellently presented. I truly loved this beginning. Could make an excellent book, or even a movie....


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-1 Sayu 1 year, 11 months ago Reply

That was cool i really enjoyed it


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