Discussion of "A Friend in Need" by ShadowMan

Great continuation. I'm extremely curious to see where you go with the ATM withdrawl and what the gruff man's message is!
And I love how you show what is happening from both Donald's view point and the gruff man's, and then you have them come together.

Nice move ShadowMan. It certainly seems we had similar thoughts about continuing this one. Maybe we should build off each other's? That would be interesting.

Not a bad idea - I'm not sure how it would work with two separate story lines, though. What did you have in mind?

We just keep swapping lines. Like now, I'll work on Friend in Need and you work on Sought. Then after we post those chapters, I got back to Sought and you continue Friend in Need. So we just keep swapping chapters on the story line. Mix it up, ya know?

Glad to see you back, ShadowMan! Excellent chapter here, too!
I'm really interested in discussing a project with you. I've already got nashvillebecker, dogdeity11 and wsells on the line. I'm hoping to hear from honeygloom, crystalfoo, psycho1_77 and Cheeseliker, as well. Please drop me an email... lexallen@yahoo.com so that I'll have your email address. Thanks!

Continuation is good, bringing up Donald's mental health and the ATM plot point was great.

I re-read this after going through the previous chapters and have to upgrade my comment from previously. I can't remember the name of the danged movie...where moles would get a phone call, hear a certain phrase and then boogie off to blow something up...kind of like how this is going and I like it. I like it alot! 4 points!

You're doing a great job flowing off the prior story. This string of chpters looks like it's going somewhere.