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Discussion of "October Chill : The Message" by ShadowMan

1 ShadowMan 8 years, 7 months ago Reply

Sorry for the delay. Now I can finally go back and read all of yours and vote.

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2 wsells 8 years, 7 months ago Reply

Oooh. Sent an October Chill through me. I really liked the way the place was brighter and the air was easier to breathe once he left. Excellent!

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2 dogdeity11 8 years, 7 months ago Reply

Excellent Shadow. Horror is for sure your genre man. really cool idea with the necklace in the coffee...leading him to the message. I can totally see that scene in a scary movie.

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2 writerwannabe 8 years, 7 months ago Reply

Whoooeeee! Yessir, this is horror! Not the ax, chainsaw kind of gore horror but, the psychological, sneak into your brain, run down your spine, strangle the heart kind. I love it!
Great job, Shadow.

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2 Cheeseliker 8 years, 7 months ago Reply

NIce chapter shadowman. Now I must figure out how to continue this. It is surely a tough act to follow.

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2 Psycho1_77 8 years, 7 months ago Reply

Great start chapter... I have to agree with all above comments. anyway... 5 stars...

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2 honeygloom 8 years, 7 months ago Reply

Somehow I missed this before. But late or not I'm still giving you a five for the upside down crosses and that phenomenally creepy message!

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2 nashvillebecker 8 years, 7 months ago Reply

Wow. This lends itself to a movie, no doubt. While other branches are creepier, more deranged, and often more detailed, you took the humble opener and followed it simply. And made the scariest impression of the bunch. While I'm not big on changing fonts to make a point, it works. Holy crap, it works. I may have peed myself; methinks I need to change my socks.

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2 theblackhand 8 years, 6 months ago Reply

This was a great continuation of the beginning. So many great leads to a good mash. You have an eye for chilling to the bone type horror....5 all the way Shadowman..

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