Discussion of "A Matter of Time - Chapter Two" by ShadowMan
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ShadowMan 5 years, 3 months ago
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I wrote this and the previous chapter during lunch. I hope you like it! Please vote. |
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writerwannabe 5 years, 3 months ago
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Excellent story, ShadowMan. The ending (I assume that chapter two was the last chapter) was as unexpected as a snow cone in hell!! Great!! |
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dogdeity11 5 years, 3 months ago
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outstanding work dude! |
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ShadowMan 5 years, 3 months ago
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Thanks everyone - I appreciate the comments! |
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livesideways22 5 years, 3 months ago
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great twist, didnt see that one coming! I'm curious to see what would happen if you wrote something similar in a first person POV but included that much detail. |
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