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Discussion of "They Will Return" by ShadowMan


1 writerwannabe 6 years, 6 months ago Reply

You could end this one here and it'd be great. Or, you could continue and make it greater...I'm hoping you take it a bit further.


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1 ShadowMan 6 years, 6 months ago Reply

Thanks, ww. I am mulling it over and have a couple of thoughts for a new chapter ...


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1 theblackhand 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

This is great work....will you read my work and comment/vote?


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1 honeygloom 6 years, 6 months ago Reply

Ohh that's creepy. Very nice work:)


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1 JadeRose 6 years, 6 months ago Reply

Very well done, I hope you don't mind that I came up with my own angle, and have a couple more floating around in my head. It's a very thought provoking piece to say the least! Of all of them on here, I keep coming back to this one.


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1 st0rmsw3pt 6 years, 5 months ago Reply

love it! so vivid, i could 'see' the story as a movie!


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1 ShadowMan 6 years, 5 months ago Reply

Thanks for the comments everyone. This is one of my own favorites, so I'm happy you liked it.


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1 incarna 6 years, 5 months ago Reply

I very much like the setup you have here. Constructively the room and the main character could use more description. Well done.


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1 Jackoalltrades 6 years, 5 months ago Reply

This reminds me sort of "One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest". It just might be the Asylum setting, though. Anyway, all I can say is "Damn!" That was fun to read. Creepy, but still a thrill. I enjoyed the dream catcher touch immensely.


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