Discussion of "October Chill: "Good Morning!" (2)" by ShadowMan

Well, I proofread this three times and still missed a word - grrrr.... There should be the word "you" in the (now) obvious place in the second to the last paragraph.

I swear it was there the first time I read it :-)

Totally twisted!!! I truly thought I had boxed you into a corner, but you took it to another level all together. SPOOOOKEEEEY!

You know that blowing up a balloon creates an explosion at some point. I can't see how the tension can continue to be ratcheted up, as it is here, without an explosion way before you get to chapter 8 or 7 or 6, for that matter. I need to lie down for a few minutes!!

Oh, that's wrong! I love it!!!

Absolutely gruesome... twisted... horrific... beautiful. Loved it, and I'm inclined to agree with Lex... at some point, this is going to really explode in a major way...I wait in quiet anticipation...

Shadow...fantastic! Way to give it a defined plot, appropriate to a Halloween horror story. Now the next mashers can flesh out the brutalities of the mission...or will they? (Evil laugh)
Definite five from me.

Holy freakin crap man. I have to follow this? Jeez leweeeeez! I'll try my best but damn, you both had made quite an awesome story so far.

Oooh schnot. Classic: a deal with the devil. Sinister, sophisticated, driven. Testing Mr. Knox's love. Collecting souls. Whoo. (Why do I get the feeling writing this stuff is a walk in the park for you?) (5)

Man this was awesome. You followed brilliantly. Great mash!

Congratulations Shadow! This was a great chapter.

Hey, Shadow...mucho hand claps!! Great job and I'm glad to see you got a pay off for it!!

You're the man Shadow! Congratz on the win!!

Congrats, Shadow! You spawned a new horror classic, "The Attack of the Paper Mache' People!"

"Run, darling, run! Wait, use your lighter! Use your lighter!"

Way to go and thanks for sticking around.

Congrats man! Awesome job!