Discussion of "A Different Kind of Contract - Chapter Two" by ShadowMan

Curse you for writing a better chapter than mine! Great fill in for OCD.

I'll try to mash it again Thursday night; that's when I get most of my writing done. We'll see where it sits at that point...

In the interest of transparency, I voted for your chapter and I gave it a 5.

Glad you liked it -- and I don't think it's better, just different! I'm looking forward to the 're-Mash' on Thursday ;)

I think the two of you and wsells are a helluva team....this is an awesome story. I feel like I'm reading a best selling authors' work. Hell, maybe I am...lol. I gave this a 5, too and wish it were Thursday already!

Ha! Can I work for the OCD? This is just getting better and better. 5

Great chapter shadowman.
High 5!

Another 5 from me. Great chapter Shadow !

Wow - cinco from mio!

Thanks everyone, these comments are very encouraging (and appreciated!) -- please jump in at any time and mash this thing. Who knows what direction it will take with all the talent we have on this site.

I like the twist! compelling reading, I vote 5

Hey, add a distracting girl in here somewhere. Too much testosterone...lol. Really this is good and really have a girl in here somewhere.

Point taken. Now the only question is whether she's a good girl or a bad girl, or an independent girl with her own agenda... definitely food for thought. Mash it!

all girls are distracting - uh, there goes another one - gotta go - bye.....

awesome as always ShadowMan